Friday, December 20, 2013

Day 268: On the Corner of C and S Part 1

Next class: Creative Nonfiction.  As the name implies, these are all real stories, real places.  I am changing the names for privacy's sake, but they are original in the actual pieces.  This piece, the first of four, is based on a specific place.



On the Corner of C and S
     I don't remember how my ten-year-old self first reacted to seeing the old house isolated behind the alfalfa field.  Dense green ivy covered the left side of the house and tapered off as it moved across the front.  A few stray vines were creeping into the door frame and outlining the two bedroom windows above it and the large kitchen window to the right.  A bare patch at the far end exposed red brick, cracked and crumbly in spots.  If you stared at it long enough, the top windows made eyes and the front door was the mouth, with the ivy trying to eat the face.  The front porch, four cement slabs on brick, was unstable.  A wooden plank stretched out to the left of the front garden to conceal the parts of sidewalk that had crumbled away.  The steps led to the back door, which had a small wooden balcony above.  Maple, walnut, and birch trees forested either side of the house.  A grove of evergreen trees sealed in the house from the back.  A willow could be seen growing in the distance. 
     To our right side were the road and one neighbor.  To our left was the rest of the property.  The two-car garage with a rickety basketball hoop still attached was part of a long white storage building with a loft.  To the left of that was a weathered red barn and grain silo.  I could see a machine shed in the distance between the two buildings, and a smaller tool shed was on the right side of the garage tucked behind a red maple.   
     “Oh, Dale, look at all the ivy!  I always wanted a house with ivy.”  My mom sounded like a child let loose in a toy store as she stepped out of the car.
     “There aren’t very many houses around,” I remarked, slamming the door.  Crisp fresh air lingered with the scent of trees and faint manure accosted me.  After living in the suburbs of California, I wasn’t used to the country landscape.  It was pretty, with trees changing their leaves and dairy farms dotting rolling fields of corn.  I wasn’t sure if I’d like to live here though.
     We had been looking at houses for nearly a month, and today’s real estate was a farmhouse nestled on five acres of land.  Casco, population 583, was a forty minute drive from Green Bay, the nearest large city and home of the Green Bay Packers.  There were gas stations, grocery stores, and a diner closer to our house, but the shopping that we preferred resided in the city.
     The mouth of the house opened and a short woman in light wash jeans and a sweatshirt walked out.
     “Hi, my name is Ruth.  You must be the O'Briens.”  She extended her wrinkling hand to my dad, who shook it strongly and followed her inside.  The screen door squeaked shut behind us.
     Momma gasped.  “Can you imagine me cooking in a kitchen this size?”
     I couldn’t.  It was the largest kitchen I had ever seen- twice the size of my old bedroom- with counter space and cabinets lining two walls. 
     “Farm kitchens are always built large,” the owner explained.
     “How old is the house?” my dad asked.
     “It was built in 1910.”
     “And it’s still standing?” I thought to myself.  “Amazing.”

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