Tuesday, August 6, 2013

Day 203: The Story of Another Hour

I wanted to post this months ago, but I didn't have the file until now.  This is a story I wrote for my final English portfolio.  The assignment was to write a creative piece based on a story we had read in class.  "The Story of Another Hour" is based on "The Story of an Hour," written by Kate Chopin.  My story is written from the sister's perspective.  I recommend reading the original first (it's short) and then mine so you can experience the full effect of the perspective switch and understand what my story is about.



Golden rays glimmered through lace curtains and warmed Josephine’s broad shoulders as she sat in her floral upholstered wing-back chair darning her husband’s socks.  Her children were still at school, and her husband was at the work.  A loud rap on the front door jolted the peaceful silence that had permeated the house, causing Josephine to drop her sock with surprise.  Her dress rustled against the hardwood floor as she strode to the door.
     “Oh my, Mr. Richards, please do come in!” 
     She stood aside, and Richards nodded his head in gratitude as he walked in slowly.  His thinning hair was unkempt, as though he had run his hand through it several times, his clothes were wrinkled, and his eyes looked red and puffy.
     “Won’t you sit down?”  She gestured to the cream colored sofa.  “Can I get you something to drink?”
     “No thank you.  I couldn’t possibly rest, or do much of anything at the moment.”
     “Whatever is the problem?  I’m afraid my husband isn’t here right now, but perhaps I can relay the message to him.”
     “That won’t be necessary.  What I need to say concerns you.”
     “Me?” Josephine’s eyes prickled with fear.
     “You, and your sister.”  Richards swallowed hard and readjusted his glasses from slipping off his perspiring face.  “Josephine, I have heard some terrible news.  I did not want to believe it, but I just received a telegram that confirmed it.  Brently Mallard is dead.”
     Josephine stared at him blankly, hardly moving a muscle.
     “I found out late last night,” Richards continued.  “A telegram came in, saying that the train trestle over Plover Ravine had finally given way.  The train plummeted over fifteen feet.  There was a terrible fire afterwards.  It took some time for men to get down there and look for survivors.  A second telegram followed a few hours later.  Brently’s name appeared on the list of passengers who were killed instantly.”      
     Once this information sunk in, Josephine was the one who needed to sit down.  She held her hand upturned on her forehead and let out a moan, “Oh my poor sister!”  She took out an embroidered handkerchief from her sleeve and dabbed her eyes.
     Richards gave her a moment to compose herself.  He sniffed away any sadness that had started creeping upon him again before he continued.  “Considering the state of your sister’s health,” he explained, “I could not tell her the news directly.  I decided that I should tell you.  I was sure you would know a delicate way of handling your sister.”
     “Yes,” she sighed, thinking about how depressed her sister would be after hearing the news.  She envisioned that the news might cause her sister’s frail body to have a heart attack right in front of her.  Josephine shook the image from her mind.
     “Thank you for telling me first, Mr. Richards.  You did the right thing.”
     “I thought we should tell her now.  There is no sense in denying the inevitable.”
     “I suppose you are right.” 
      Josephine stiffly arose from her sofa and arranged for her next door neighbor to look after her children before she rode with Richards to her sister’s house.  All the way there Josephine rehearsed in her mind what she would tell her sister.  She worried over which words would deliver the least damaging blows.  At length, she decided the best course of action would be to discuss with her sister how death was a normal part of life and how a woman as young as her would have a good chance of getting another husband.  Josephine and her husband could house her until she was able to be supported again.
     The chestnut mare whinnied as the carriage stopped in front of Mr. Mallard’s house.  Richards helped Josephine down from the carriage, and they walked up to the front door.
     “Are you ready?” he asked her.
     Josephine took a deep breath in, and when she exhaled, she found an inner strength.  “Yes, I am.”  She knocked softly on her sister’s door and swept a stray brown lock of hair from her forehead as she waited.
     The door squeaked open, and a thin-faced woman about a head shorter than Josephine stood there, a broad smile spreading across her pallid face when she saw who her company was.
     “Josephine! Mr. Richards! What a pleasant surprise!  Please come in.”  Mrs. Mallard ushered her guests inside. 
     Her sister’s cheerful demeanor made the news Josephine had to deliver weigh heavier on her heart.  How could she tell her sister that her husband was dead, his body charred beyond recognition?  She tried to push the emotion aside.
     “How are you feeling, Louise, darling?”
     “Quite well, sister, thank you.  And yourself?”
     “Well.”  Josephine hesitated.  “Louise, you know that I am always here for you, right?”
     “Yes, of course.  You’re a wonderful sister.”
     “No matter what happens I will try to help you in any way that I can.”  She looked towards her sister, who was puzzled now but nodded as an encouragement to continue.  “It pains me to have to tell you this, Louise, dear, but I am afraid you will be on your own for quite some time.”
     Mrs. Mallard’s brows were furrowed.  “What are you talking about?”
     Josephine squeezed her sister’s hand tightly.  “Try to remain calm.  I know your future looks uncertain now, but my Henry and I will be there for you every step of the way.  You are a brave woman and still have your beauty.  You will do fine for yourself.”
     “Josephine,” Mrs. Mallard’s voice rose sharply, “please stop speaking in riddles and tell me what is the matter!”
     She uttered softly, “Brently has passed on to a better place.”
     “What?!”
     Josephine allowed Richards to fill in the gaps and looked despondently on at her sister wailing as the realization of Mr. Mallard’s death sunk in. 
     “I can’t imagine what pain Louise must be in right now,” she reflected.  “My life would end if Henry died.  Life is too scary to think about with no one there to protect you.” She shuddered and tried to think of something more positive.  “But Louise will be alright.  With time, she can overcome her grief and get married again.  Maybe can even have a child this time!”
     After Mrs. Mallard had cried every tear she had, she announced that she wanted to go to her room for a few minutes.  Josephine offered to follow her, but she curtly said wanted to be alone. Helplessly, she watched as Mrs. Mallard ascended the winding staircase to be alone with her thoughts.
 

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